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		IceNine *The Freshest*
  
  Joined: 08 Sep 2003 Posts: 1459 Location: Bel Air
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				 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 01:34:54    Post Subject: My New Site Design | 
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				No, not "My System Specs". I decided to scrap that 'cause no one really cared.
 
 
This is the site that actually makes me money! I do website design and computer consultation for a living. Unfortunately, my old site was quite dated so I worked for a couple hours today and cleaned it all up. I have a little more work to do, but it's all coming along smoothly.
 
 
Note that I have a minimalistic style because there are so many sites out there that are cramped and hard to navigate. Tell me what you think:
 
 
http://www.bluestardesign.net/
 
 
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		Little Bruin 
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Joined: 07 Apr 2003 
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		heylinder Rated XXX
  
  Joined: 04 Aug 2003 Posts: 1938 Location: Georgia
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				 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 10:40:39    Post Subject:  | 
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				 	  | Quote: | 	 		  | number our one priority | 	  
 
 
 
Should that be our number one priority ?  
 
 
Also , you have one to many "we" in there ... you might want to replace it with your sites name to avoid redundancy. That's strictly my opinion , not a grammar thing really  
 
 
Other than those two things I like it so far. Great colors , easy to read and understand   | 
			 
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		Dud3! Forum abandoner
  
  Joined: 21 Aug 2003 Posts: 1469 Location: Florida
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				 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 11:59:47    Post Subject:  | 
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				As we are currently working on a few sites currently, please visit our past projects:
 
 
We will gladly address any questions or problems you have and if we cannot help we will help find a service to fit your requirements.
 
 
 
Other than that, the site is neat and fast!    _________________ Due to a not-that-interesting turn of events, I am now known as Justin Danger.  | 
			 
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		heylinder Rated XXX
  
  Joined: 04 Aug 2003 Posts: 1938 Location: Georgia
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				 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 14:38:50    Post Subject:  | 
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				I think Dud3 speaks of redundancy also   So it's NOT just me    | 
			 
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		IceNine *The Freshest*
  
  Joined: 08 Sep 2003 Posts: 1459 Location: Bel Air
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				 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 14:54:25    Post Subject:  | 
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				Thanks for the help guys. I'm just a little frazzled from the travel I just went through   _________________
  
 
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