heylinder
Rated XXX
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 Posted: Sat, 25 Oct 2003 10:40:39 Post Subject: |
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| Quote: | | number our one priority |
Should that be our number one priority ?
Also , you have one to many "we" in there ... you might want to replace it with your sites name to avoid redundancy. That's strictly my opinion , not a grammar thing really 
Other than those two things I like it so far. Great colors , easy to read and understand |
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